STFO!!! Not sure why you are dark camera right using the triangle? Bottom light could use juice and the exposure could come up a bit. A little strange with a lot of detail in parts of the skin and then completely soft in others. Teeth have to come up and exposure bump could help. Eyes too. Jaw out a touch further and a little more boost to the energy in the mouth. Love the eyes. Awesome composition and she's great for the portfolio so just bump it up and look at the skin to see if you can even out texture somehow without softening too much.