Oh boy. Negative squinching. Definitely needs a squinch here. Good on-camera height and composition. Don't mind the hair wrap. Lacking highlights for some reason. Just a bit flat for some reason. Saturation around the brows is gone and the brow penciling is a bit too obvious. All the rage these days, but I'm a stickler for it. Nice soft smile with more squinch and a little denser on the blacks and pop to the highlights you'd be there.
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Oh boy. Negative squinching. Definitely needs a squinch here. Good on-camera height and composition. Don't mind the hair wrap. Lacking highlights for some reason. Just a bit flat for some reason. Saturation around the brows is gone and the brow penciling is a bit too obvious. All the rage these days, but I'm a stickler for it. Nice soft smile with more squinch and a little denser on the blacks and pop to the highlights you'd be there.
Awesome. Thanks for the critique Peter! I will definitely work on those things. Hoping to improve
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