I really like the overall look. However, the reason for my rating not being as high as I might give it is the position of the camera. Too low. I can see way too much up her nose. Also under her chin. one other thing is I would use photoshop to close her center of her mouth. that tiny bit that is open is distracting in my opinion. Do you have others with a higher camera position? Also, did you try without the jewelry?
I feel there are a couple things that can be improved, maybe you can get her in front of the camera again? What I would change or pay a closer attention to:
- Colors are a bit off.
- It looks overexposed, I see no volume on the subject, that's important.
- The necklace is a bit crooked, I would have removed it for the contest.
- There is only one earring visible, that is distracting, I would have removed it as well.
- Expression is not super interesting, I would have lower her chin a little bit.
- The camera right shoulder is too low compared with the camera left shoulder.
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I really like the overall look. However, the reason for my rating not being as high as I might give it is the position of the camera. Too low. I can see way too much up her nose. Also under her chin. one other thing is I would use photoshop to close her center of her mouth. that tiny bit that is open is distracting in my opinion. Do you have others with a higher camera position? Also, did you try without the jewelry?
I feel there are a couple things that can be improved, maybe you can get her in front of the camera again? What I would change or pay a closer attention to:
- Colors are a bit off.
- It looks overexposed, I see no volume on the subject, that's important.
- The necklace is a bit crooked, I would have removed it for the contest.
- There is only one earring visible, that is distracting, I would have removed it as well.
- Expression is not super interesting, I would have lower her chin a little bit.
- The camera right shoulder is too low compared with the camera left shoulder.
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